Wednesday, 18 June 2008
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JOY IN RECEIVING
I am thinking what can be the extreme limit for the stongest person to break down? Why we take for granted that the other person has infinite energy and nothing can blow him/her? Stones also need love, life dwell there also. Where is the joy more……..in gving or in receiving with gratefulness? Giving only doesn’t accomplish us. Deep down inside, we want to receive - an unknown gift for which unknowlingly we are waiting from unknown time ! Relationship is nothing but infinite continuation of giving and receiving! Some lines came in my mind……….
A desire has befallen from my heart to make me insane,
A desire to have your love, care and everything of yours!
I am telling my soul to haunt my body and to make it weak,
Make my body an impediment one who cries for love
I want to see a step of yours towards my soul
For I know the cries of my body can only melt your frozen heart!
I am telling my eyes not to twinkle with every moment of life
But I am pressing my eyelids so hard in the hope of a tear,
I want to see upcoming of your hands towards my eyes
For I know my smile cannot make you understand who am I!
It has been very long, since I am pretending myself as tough
A heart which can endure every draconian word thrown on it
A smile which has the power to turn every misery into celebration
Now, I want to see joy in receiving rather than in giving!
May be sporadic renewals of my cries can lay stone in your way,
Stepping on which can make you to touch the horizon of my soul!
~nidhi
Thanks Dyse DysonianEyesso much for your love and affection. You have painted a rainbow making my life to be filled with colorful thoughts. I so much adore your comment. The poem is answering all my questions. Thanks so much! Really I don't have words to describe this feeling!
This is the poem that she handed back to me.....
A desire has befallen from my heart to make me insane
I honor the honesty with in thee!
A desire to have your love, care and everything of yours
Would that I could fullfill these dreams of yours for your joy alone
I look into your heart and see You..let me cradle You in mine own until thou art fullfulled
Come child rise above the body to recieve All there is
Behold I step forward to thee Now
warmth in love warms even the coolest of stone
How deep your need precious soul..to deprive your self thus
Even stones have been know to weep. Rest in peace and the tears shall flow easily
My fingers raise to catch your tear drops each a percious treasure
Perhaps you are wrong and I can see the sorrow behind the smile always?
Then be fragile little one allow your self to be protected by other
no heart needs be so hard ...stones crack ..and break ..smiles soften and linger
Yet celebration without love needed is empty is it not
Open your heart and mind and recieve the fountain is eternal..Recieve
Each pebble catches my eye and as ever I stoop to put in to my bag with care
Stepping on which can make you to touch the horizon of my soul!
I hold up the sparkiing stone of song
And look far into Your Horizon seeing more than you ever imagined I might.
I press my sole gently upon your soul and in the meeting healing begins
~Dyse
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Comments (10)
i am just wondering about the depth of your writing.
You are so much matured at heart. And amazing...
Take care...am doing fine...
Lots of love and prayers from my side for you...
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God Bless You !
You did an amazing job. Isn't that so true. Sometimes we forget the needs of everyone. For everyone needs love just as we all do. It doesn't stop at the strong ones... the weak strong and inbetween all need to be reminded that love is what we are here for.
Brilliant writing , pristine and humbling with yearning. You must be bilingual to feel what you feel and write the way you do.
@ZSA_MD - Thanks for your lovely poem. I am thinking to present it to my father after my marriage. Thanks for your kind words also! I am so glad that you liked the poem. Yeah, I am bilingual...knowing hindi and obviously english!
Beautiful writing from a beautiful person...I am leaving for California today..not sure how much I will be able to comment while gone..you take care of yourself!!!
Beautiful writings! That's true..........even stones, need love! So true!
Sigh! Even the hardest of hearts---need a little love. Thanks for reminding
us all of that. I missed you all too. R. Hood
Hi dear. Thanks for your kind words. Yes, working in the
library was fun, but not in that library. I had worked in others,
and really enjoyed it. I worked in our school library, for over
4-8 years. It was a pleasure. I also, worked in a college library.
No one was wierd in any of them. Hugs, R. Hood
beautiful words, beautiful flows, brilliant wisdom ox namaste to thee, too ox