Tuesday, 29 July 2008

  • WHY ARE PROMISES MADE?

    Why are promises made? Why we need to give assurance for the future to someone? Does it not create some sort of obligation, some binding in the relationship? Why don’t we just go and give all the feelings to the relationship in such a way that both the sides know some silent, unsaid promises will always be kept. Promises have captured such an important part of our life, infact I am feeling that the foundation of all the pious relationship starts with ‘promises’.

     

    I see myself in mirage of your promises

    rather than in mirror which you hold.

    Why are promises made?

    Has the sky also promised mother

    to shower rain,

    light the night with stars and moon?

    Has the air also promised the leaves

    for thrilling life,

    unending growth and balmy love?

    May be yes,

    May be a promise made in silence!

    Why are promises made?

     

    Why enigma spirals around my life

    And you need to give me

    derision binding with some subtle words

    languid in falseness.

    I collect your warm raindrop promises

    on my palm, hiding it from sun

    But with a fear when barren will appear,

    these raindrops will turn vultures

    gashing every portion of my soul.

    I can’t see now ladder of your promises

    but derision binding of my expectations.

     

    Why are promises made?

    You always draw love aroma by promises

    Assuring me that you are always by my side

    You are just a treacherous hunter, hunting my dreams

    Please, don’t bind me….

    Even I know you are just bystander

    But I love to hear your words,

    these falseness, meaningless

    even when I know they are metaphors, fairy tales!

    I love when you captivate me within promise bars

    and I love to shout, “Why are promises made?”

    ~nidhi

Comments (4)

  • DysonianEyes
    I'm a nut...

    Lovely..post..the deepest promises are ( in my life) remained silent ..Silent Awareness...the verbal promises...make my heart sing.....as I also give


    them...in my heart..I usually know if a verbalized promise ( on any side) is a wish a hope a dream or a deep truth...I love Love Letters...they dont even need to be about or to me..but about Love..in general and yes sure..some context that lets me know the writer is thinking of me...even if briefly..


    ie " the sunset blazed with colors of ecstacy and the whisper of memory crossed my soul...it was a message of love recalled in your arms" ...sigh*


    now is that an untruth? a metaphor? or reality? If I wrote that to anyone..it would be reality in the moment...and perhaps in their arms I promised to love them forever...( well that has never been with drawn once spoken) ......but.....promises..that are repeatedly promising an action....and repeatedly failed to follow through on...speaks to the ethics of the person..and is a sad thing to witness .......


    especially if one has come to trust and rely on anothers steady follow through....so in some cases...promises are best not spoken if the person even suspects they are not reliable to follow through..


    Hugs..and Blessings..


    >>DySe<<

  • belskaylar

    wow. what timing; i am so with you, due to the last year's experience with a now ex-lover. i think i will work on a poem

    about some of it. (have already posted one or two at least, over course of the year.) i know that when i was younger

    i would say whatever someone wanted to hear, having no integrity of my own. so i can understand it but still unable

    to tolerate in someone close to me. even though the Course in Miracles says that only loving thoughts are true

    and everything else is a call for Love. ah, well, give me a few more lifetimes

  • Riding_Hood

    So beautful. R. Hood/Sunsetheart

  • ravensgift

    Really beautiful. I loved this line: these raindrops will turn vultures

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