FREEFALL

Sunday, 05 October 2008

FREEFALL
thousand faces
hidden behind
those clouds
fluttering heart
is echoing love
to soar desires
for a glimpse
of a pilgrimage voyage
alone in sea of past
to flee an angel message
thrashed somewhere
in redundant earthy needs
just to welcome unknowingly
- a freefall from heaven above!
~ nidhi

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Yeah you came back with a great poem... nice very nice. I love it. I am doing okay.... Can't complain about lot of things.
The Signature Of A True Human Is The Smile He/She Brings On The Face Of Others.
LonelyPoet
- 10/5/2008 3:05 PM
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I like this one
- 10/5/2008 8:03 PM
- oh_mother_may_I (message)
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This is a beautiful message and poem. I thank you for your

prayers. I am really sad, and I am really thinking, I might

lose him, and I don't want to lose him. (sniff). R. Hood
- 10/5/2008 9:50 PM
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Very nice. Fits well in my situation.
- 10/6/2008 4:02 AM
- zionlover (message)
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LOVE this one! (i only hope i'm not putting my own interpretation on it :)
- 10/6/2008 10:30 PM
- belskaylar (message)
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That is just beautiful..thanks for sharing it with us!
- 10/7/2008 2:20 AM
- portiajules (message)
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when we're in freefall, nothing else to do but enjoy!
- 10/7/2008 9:09 AM
- llibra (message)
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I like it.
- 10/19/2008 3:40 AM
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Oh I love this one!! Bravo!
- 10/21/2008 12:58 AM
- DysonianEyes (message)
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Beautiful!! I Miss your words
- 10/30/2008 8:36 AM
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Hey Nidhi,
I miss you, where are you? Come around once in a while... okay
The Signature Of A True Human Is The Smile He/She Brings On The Face Of Others.
LonelyPoet
- 11/13/2008 6:07 PM
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Your voice will never falter ---love and Happy Thanksgiving. R. Hood
- 11/17/2008 11:08 AM
- Riding_Hood (message)
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WHERE have you been???
- 11/21/2008 9:53 AM
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